TUCSON WRITERS - need help with my scripts

[Dean Lachiusa]

Hi, I hope there's someone out there that is in Tucson. I have a least one script that I would like to have read by a local writer that can interject format corrections and other ideas. This is for a sci-fi thriller (lite horror) feature script.
-Dean Lachiusa
[e-mail]

[Mike Mortimer]

Hi, Dean. I don't live in Tucson, but if you can email your script to me, I'd be happy to read it and give you feedback. I've written quite a few at this point and should be able to help. - Mike Mortimer ([e-mail])

[Dean Lachiusa]

Thank you. I'll keep this idea on the back burner - if I cannot find a local person to meet with me, etc.

[Michael Murphy]

You can get feedback from other screenwriters on this message board. http://messageboard.donedealpro.com/boards/index.php

[Dean Lachiusa]

Hmmm, not at all what I'm looking for.

[Michael Murphy]

Sorry that wasn't helpful. Regarding formatting help, do you have screenwriting software? Or are your questions not really basic fomatting?
Mike